I Will Not See Brokeback Mountain

Discussion in 'Free Speech Alley' started by CalcoTiger, Jan 30, 2006.

  1. red55

    red55 curmudgeon Staff Member

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    I understand your point clearly, amigo. But it's a bloody horrible sentence.:grin:

    Comma-spliced independent phrases and complex-compound structure with a subordinating conjunction and inappropriate ampersand use.

    I know this because copy editors hammer me on it all of the time. Thank heavens for them, for I mangle the English language regularly. :hihi:
     

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